I like your photo story concept. One thing that stands out for me is the older more experienced hands in some photos, and the younger hands learning from those experienced hands - brought back fond memories of making things with my grandmother. Thank you for bringing such a fond memory back to me through your photo story.
This is an awesome story. Remove some of the more redundant images. One that are repetitive or show the same part of the story. I would suggest showing a group of people enjoying a meal that these are a part of. Or, even showing an individual enjoying these meatballs. Seeing them presented as a group is kind of cool, but these are meant to be eaten and enjoyed. That is the whole reason for preparing food, so I think you should bring the story to that end. Awesome work!
There's a good story here. However, I was a little confused by the current flow, which has the process of making the base and then making the balls and then back to making the base. I would rearrange these images for a more consistent start-to-finish flow. Then I would remove some of the similar shots, as previously mentioned, to avoid repetition. Otherwise, I love the concept of the family coming together for this ritual meal and the teaching process that goes along with it.
Great story of family coming together! As other people have stated I would just remove images that are repetitive. I also agree that having a picture of everyone enjoying what they just make would make for a perfect last photo. Also you have taken many wonderful pictures.
I like your photo story concept. One thing that stands out for me is the older more experienced hands in some photos, and the younger hands learning from those experienced hands - brought back fond memories of making things with my grandmother. Thank you for bringing such a fond memory back to me through your photo story.
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ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome story. Remove some of the more redundant images. One that are repetitive or show the same part of the story. I would suggest showing a group of people enjoying a meal that these are a part of. Or, even showing an individual enjoying these meatballs. Seeing them presented as a group is kind of cool, but these are meant to be eaten and enjoyed. That is the whole reason for preparing food, so I think you should bring the story to that end. Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteThere's a good story here. However, I was a little confused by the current flow, which has the process of making the base and then making the balls and then back to making the base. I would rearrange these images for a more consistent start-to-finish flow. Then I would remove some of the similar shots, as previously mentioned, to avoid repetition. Otherwise, I love the concept of the family coming together for this ritual meal and the teaching process that goes along with it.
ReplyDeleteGreat story of family coming together! As other people have stated I would just remove images that are repetitive. I also agree that having a picture of everyone enjoying what they just make would make for a perfect last photo. Also you have taken many wonderful pictures.
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